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Johanna Brookner's avatar

Excellent and clever way of using all the elements you were given.

Lorraine Lai's avatar

Thank you! It definitely was out of my comfort zone but a great exercise nonetheless :-)

Sheryl Parbhoo's avatar

Powerful writing here, Lorraine! What a great way to practice writing out of the box! Creepy as heck, full of imagery. Great job!

Lorraine Lai's avatar

Awww thank you so much! I really enjoyed this challenge and look forward to more of them.

I found that being given prompts forced my focus making it easier to write in some ways 🙂

April's avatar

Ohhh I like it! I felt the coldness of the room and the bleakness of the situation; the doctor’s despair. Very eerie ! I love it!

I felt my heart beating faster and started to feel panicky when the stairs seemed to never bring him closer to the top. 😮

Lorraine Lai's avatar

Thank you, April! It definitely was a fun story to tackle. 😊